Definatly improving, looks a little sloppy though, Also you use Papyrus font wayy to much. Another thing you should try and keep the render as clear as possible so keep it how it is from the original stock/render. Don't brush over it or anything. Apart from that good progress
How about you just let oscar give the intelligent input? Since you have nothing intelligent to say and you are most probably totally unskilled in this area, i suggest you stop talking and start reading.